"The Nurse"
Journal Entry: Sat Apr 14, 2007, 5:11 PM
- Mood:
Big Grin - Listening to: RadioHead
- Reading: Battle Royale (The novel) again...
- Watching: Bleach
- Playing: Guitar Heroes II
- Eating: Sushi
- Drinking: ramune (Japanese Lemonade)
The 'me' section
As I said last time there will always be good and bad. At the moment I'm good but a few weeks ago it was bad... VERY bad. Life is just going to keep doing that to me. However I'm enjoying my Japanese course and I have a Job so at this very Moment all is well.
The Creative section
"This is Different" was a bit of a breakthrough for me. For me, this is going in a very different direction to what basically all my other stuff does (Which 9 times out of ten just looks like whiny poetry). People who have read this have come up with entirely different interpretations to what I had originally in mind which was exactly what I wanted.
The strange thing about this poem is how it was built and more important the characters who transpired. It sounds strange to say this about a piece of my own work but I have become transfixed on the female character who I have simply dubbed "The Nurse".
Although I feel that This Is Different is a finished poem, I do not feel that the story of The Nurse is over and although the clues are there people do not seem to see the relationship between The Nurse and the Narrator of the poem. I have started planning a series of poems about these two characters which I want to put into full motion but obviously I need some feedback first about whether I should carry this on.
I plan to have "This Is Different" as the first poem in the series but not the first or last chronologically. It gives a very good insight into the world of "The Nurse" although I know it isn't clear yet as to why.
Devious Comments
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mari
A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
I am glad things are going uphill, and that is a positive sign, and yuo seem encouraged by that. :hgu:
I am doing just fine...thanks for asking.
You take care, and visit more often.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
Guess you could just hide them..hehe.
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Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.
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Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.
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Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Am I the star beneath the stairs?
Am I a ghost upon the stage?
Am I your anything?
how have you been..?
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Am I the star beneath the stairs?
Am I a ghost upon the stage?
Am I your anything?
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Am I the star beneath the stairs?
Am I a ghost upon the stage?
Am I your anything?
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
I know you will return to existing problems, but maybe the time away will give you a fresh outlook, or give you the stamina to overcome some of them.
You take care, and have a safe trip, be careful, and stay well.
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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
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I've missed your support.
Thanks for taking the time to give me both today.
Miss ya.
-Wy?
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You can't take the sky from me.
but thanks so much. Your kind words, though corney
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"There is no greater evil than men's failure to consult and to consider." - Sophocles' Antigone
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Hmm....
-brita
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"There is no greater evil than men's failure to consult and to consider." - Sophocles' Antigone
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