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"The Nurse"

Journal Entry: Sat Apr 14, 2007, 5:11 PM
  • Mood: Big Grin
  • Listening to: RadioHead
  • Reading: Battle Royale (The novel) again...
  • Watching: Bleach
  • Playing: Guitar Heroes II
  • Eating: Sushi
  • Drinking: ramune (Japanese Lemonade)
The 'me' section
As I said last time there will always be good and bad. At the moment I'm good but a few weeks ago it was bad... VERY bad. Life is just going to keep doing that to me. However I'm enjoying my Japanese course and I have a Job so at this very Moment all is well.

The Creative section
"This is Different" was a bit of a breakthrough for me. For me, this is going in a very different direction to what basically all my other stuff does (Which 9 times out of ten just looks like whiny poetry). People who have read this have come up with entirely different interpretations to what I had originally in mind which was exactly what I wanted.

The strange thing about this poem is how it was built and more important the characters who transpired. It sounds strange to say this about a piece of my own work but I have become transfixed on the female character who I have simply dubbed "The Nurse".

Although I feel that This Is Different is a finished poem, I do not feel that the story of The Nurse is over and although the clues are there people do not seem to see the relationship between The Nurse and the Narrator of the poem. I have started planning a series of poems about these two characters which I want to put into full motion but obviously I need some feedback first about whether I should carry this on.

I plan to have "This Is Different" as the first poem in the series but not the first or last chronologically. It gives a very good insight into the world of "The Nurse" although I know it isn't clear yet as to why.

Devious Information

  • Current Age: 18
  • Current Residence: England
  • Interests: Poetry, games, music.
  • Favourite movie: The Butterfly effect
  • Favourite band or musician: Mars volta, Auditory Aphasia, Muse
  • Favourite genre of music: experimental/alternative/anything a little different
  • Favourite game: Final Fantasy Series
  • Personal Quote: Why not sing a happy song?
  • Tools of the Trade: My teenage Ability to belive I have it worse than anyone else...

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~euphoria-angel:iconeuphoria-angel: May 10, 2007, 5:09:13 PM
Thanks for the comment! How've you been? It's nice to see familiar people still reading my stuff on this website.

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:rose: Life is a rose, it's either pleasantly fragrant or painfully thorny :blackrose:
*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Jan 17, 2007, 7:11:50 AM Mood: Joy
How have you been?

:hug: :hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jan 16, 2007, 1:32:40 PM
Thanks for stopping by, sweetie (seriously). It was so good to see you!

I am glad things are going uphill, and that is a positive sign, and yuo seem encouraged by that. :hgu:

I am doing just fine...thanks for asking.

You take care, and visit more often. :heart:

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=phoenixreal:iconphoenixreal: Oct 24, 2006, 12:10:27 PM
*kicks the multiple posts*

Guess you could just hide them..hehe.

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Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.
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=phoenixreal:iconphoenixreal: Oct 24, 2006, 12:09:27 PM Mood: Euphoric
*dances*

:) I'm glad you are back.

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:blackrose:blessed be~*~phoenixreal:blackrose:

Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.
=phoenixreal:iconphoenixreal: Oct 24, 2006, 12:09:23 PM Mood: Euphoric
*dances*

:) I'm glad you are back.

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:blackrose:blessed be~*~phoenixreal:blackrose:

Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.
`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Oct 17, 2006, 9:00:34 AM
Hi sweetie. :hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Sep 15, 2006, 8:57:25 PM
:hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Sep 11, 2006, 9:25:40 AM
Thanks for stopping by. I am fine...and hope you are...too.

:hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Aug 18, 2006, 10:26:15 AM
Enjoy the weekend. :hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Aug 11, 2006, 2:11:46 PM
Have a great weekend. :hug:

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~alwayzdazd:iconalwayzdazd: Aug 2, 2006, 10:29:34 PM
you sound good...better. i am glad to hear that. and just so you know, i read all of the messages from you while i was away. :)

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Am I the star beneath the stairs?

Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


~alwayzdazd:iconalwayzdazd: Jul 27, 2006, 8:50:19 PM
things are going, dear. quite confusing and busy at the moment..but that should come as no surprise to you. ;)

how have you been..?

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Am I the star beneath the stairs?

Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jul 24, 2006, 7:45:49 AM
Have a nice Monday. :hug:

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~alwayzdazd:iconalwayzdazd: Jul 24, 2006, 2:15:02 AM
:heart:

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Am I the star beneath the stairs?

Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jul 18, 2006, 6:15:26 PM
Thought I would drop by. :hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jul 7, 2006, 9:54:50 AM
Have a nice weekend. :hug:

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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jul 3, 2006, 6:44:41 AM
Just thought I would drop by. :hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jun 21, 2006, 5:18:35 PM
HI sweetie...I hope that your three weeks away gives you a bit more energy and recoups some positive feelings for you. Have a wonderful time; Utah is a lovely state.

I know you will return to existing problems, but maybe the time away will give you a fresh outlook, or give you the stamina to overcome some of them.

You take care, and have a safe trip, be careful, and stay well.

:hug:

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`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: Jun 16, 2006, 7:02:26 PM
Have a good weekend, sweetie. :hug:

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~wyreth:iconwyreth: May 31, 2006, 10:41:33 PM
I missed your words.
I've missed your support.

Thanks for taking the time to give me both today.

Miss ya.
-Wy?

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You can't take the sky from me.
~eclipz04:iconeclipz04: May 23, 2006, 12:58:04 PM
Wow, thanks so much. ^.^ You're one of the people from this site I don't think I'd ever easily forget. A lot of us have sort of dissipated into the framework, life can do that I suppose...

but thanks so much. Your kind words, though corney :P are something surprising and nice to have said to you every so often. ^.^

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"There is no greater evil than men's failure to consult and to consider." - Sophocles' Antigone
`bookdiva:iconbookdiva: May 22, 2006, 6:48:48 PM
:hug: Thank you for the smile. :) We all can use those.

Like :hug:s a smile can make one feel cared for.

:hug: :)

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Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
~eclipz04:iconeclipz04: May 2, 2006, 1:10:12 PM
Something to say to me, eh?

Hmm....

-brita

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"There is no greater evil than men's failure to consult and to consider." - Sophocles' Antigone