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This is me
this is what I hate
and this is you
this is what you hate

think about the things that come to you
do not just dismiss the obvious
that your not who you wanted to be
that I\'m more like you than me

Words come out I don\'t mean
Words come out and pierce my skin
no matter what I say to you
you always seem to jump right through

this is you
this is what I hate
and this is me
this is what you hate

You love me for what I\'m not
You like the things you touch
you like the taste of my hate for you
you like to hate the things you do

alone you cry to everyone around
fly away from there so you can escape from here
come knocking on my door so you can prove yourself
Run away once more so you can lose yourself

This is me
this is what I hate
and this is you
this is what I hate

Your just a fucked up bitch
you don\'t know what you really want
you know it doesn\'t mean anything to you
Becuase I am just a fucked up you

You have rabies
I\'ve been bit
my love for you it caffinated
my hate for you is dead asleep

This is me
this is what we hate
This is you
this is what we hate
©2003-2009 ~walkingsoul
:iconwalkingsoul:

Author's Comments

This is a seriously fucked up poem. Before you post saying it has no rhyme scheme or it doesn't flow properly, I made it that way on purpose. It all does make sense but It's all just got hidden meanings, To make this guy seem more fucked up than he already is. This is more of an experiment and just a change. This isn't going to be common, don't worry I havn't gone completly mental I just fancied a change.

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:iconserris-graphics:
i love this poem
so deep and stuff i can relate to :D (Big Grin)
good job i like your new style of poetry:) (Smile) good job ma man
:iconalwayzdazd:
talk about hidden meanings wow...this is good and easy for me to relate to..and it has its own kind of flow..awesome work! =) (Smile)
:iconbreaking-reality:
+fav

As I read this, I kept thinking, this sounds like me, not something I would write, but something that would be written to me, assuming people had the balls to be honest. I love this.

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Samantha J. Ballard
:iconhellraiserdemon:
No its all wrong. THis is not the fucked up me. THe fucked up me has much more a lemony taste. And less hate and more of a pinkish tint. You just got it wrong sorry
:iconanarchy-2000:
this is excellent, i like the way the reader can really feel what you're trying to convey,
*standing ovation!* well done!
*sits back down shamefully*
well... BYE!
:iconhaliwa87:
this is pretty cool, nice job :) (Smile)

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:iconseekingtruth:
Experiments rock! Thumbs Up

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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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:crazy::eyepopping:Keep smiling!:stab::slow:
:iconbrandi-dawn-777:
so many of us feel the same way..... but how do we know it is the same

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April 5, 2003

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